The Portrait of a Fleeting Shadow

May 20, 2010 , , , , , , ,



Tonight I am not capturing your heart
Tonight I am not scribbling for delight
I could see pain in your eyes
I could see those bland smiles
I could hear the silence
I am living another day of curse…

My mouth is craving for water
My soul is no more breathing for you
Tonight I am writing for that vanished love
Tonight I am not feeling those melodies of lust.
I could see those bland smiles
I could see those unseen tears

The twinge is agonising
The fleeting shadows are disturbing me.
I could see some flash of light
I could see some eerie smiles in the dark…
Tonight I am capturing your silence
Tonight I am not craving for your presence….

My fingers are moving slowly
My eyes are fixed,
And my tongue is no more fluttering.
Tonight I am not yearning for raindrops
Tonight I am just feeling the void…


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13 comments:

  1. Nethra12:44 PM

    Hey, that was nice. :)

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  2. Pallav10:39 PM

    Thanks Nethra :)

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  3. D211:54 PM

    This was really good.
    Satisfaction in spite of gloom.
    Well written.

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  4. Pallav1:06 AM

    Thanks D2, You got it right. It's all about emptiness, gloom and poetry :)

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  5. Journomuse1:29 AM

    Neat....I was never a fan of poetry although I had to study it in college...But seeing some of you so effortlessly craft such lovely lines, makes me rethink :)

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  6. Pallav2:27 AM

    Thanks Journomuse for loving my poetry. It feels great to get genuine appreciations :)

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  7. The Rain Crab3:07 AM

    The poem was too good! Kinda reflected what i am today, in a way, made me feel better too!

    Thanks! Pleasure reading your portrait :)

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  8. Pallav7:52 AM

    Thanks Rain Crab :)

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  9. Nalini Hebbar7:55 PM

    You poems are so full of pain and longing...great going Pallav!

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  10. wanderer10:26 PM

    YOU got an award waiting for you in my blog :)...by the way...your poems are power houses of imagination and emotion combined together...keep up the good work.

    regards,
    wanderer

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  11. Sh@s12:48 AM

    Beautifully written :)

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  12. Pallav7:19 AM

    Thanks Nalini for the appreciation

    @Wanderer...It feels great to receive such wonderful and inspirational words. Thanks for the honor wanderer :)


    @Shas...Thanks for liking my poem.

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  13. Fatima3:53 AM

    It's a wonderful poem, depicted longing, pain and anguish beautifully !!

    Glad I stopped by your blog :)

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