Submarine and Some Smokes of Ecstasy

April 26, 2010 , , , , , ,

The maroon moon is shining like never before
The air is filled with haze of harmony
There is tranquility all around
Everything is placed for that divine rejuvenation
All cigarettes are unfilled and refilled
The hole in the half filled bottle looks fine
And the bottom of that unused ball pen
Is fixed for that re-incarnation…

The air is peaceful tonight
All devotees have gathered for their evening prayer
There is a sense of pride
There is a feeling of finely tuned satisfaction
The nourishment is ready to be served
The maroon moon is shining conspicuously tonight…

The submarine is ready to sail
It is then passed one by one.
The air is different tonight
The pink haze isn’t creating chaos
All the devotees are getting soaked in desire…

Smokes, careless whispers and laughter
Is creating melodies of delight
The trance is spawned automatically…
Freedom bells are ringing beautifully
as everyone is endlessly praising the lord tonight...


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18 comments:

  1. Unknown9:11 AM

    great write love it

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  2. Pallav9:13 AM

    Thanks Kang Rave :)

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  3. Anonymous4:29 PM

    Beautifully written....I like these lines the best "And the bottom of that unused ball pen
    Is fixed for that re-incarnation…".
    Awesome !!

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  4. Pallav7:31 PM

    Thanks Binzy :)

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  5. Rakesh Vanamali7:37 PM

    Did U exchange a walk on part in the war for a lead role in the cage?

    That's precisely what these lines made me relate to!

    Very well written!

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  6. R!9:25 PM

    Loved reading it... it was almost like a ride to salvation!!

    Kp Up!!

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  7. Sushant Kumar12:56 AM

    Liked reading your poetry.

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  8. Pallav1:42 AM

    Thanks Rakesh, Richa and Sushant for liking this poem :-)

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  9. Anonymous2:40 AM

    great writing dear.............too good

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  10. Pallav7:28 AM

    Thanks anonymous :-)

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  11. nandita prakash7:38 AM

    r u one of those who feel elivated near full moon or new moon...cause ur writings reflect a magnetic aura....i hav also notice ur older posts and calculated the same...pls dnt ignore this fact cause its of real importance...can tel u more abut it if u wish...had done a research in the past.

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  12. nandita prakash7:42 AM

    r u one of those who feel elivated near full moon or new moon...cause ur writings reflect a magnetic aura....i hav also notice ur older posts and calculated the same...pls dnt ignore this fact cause its of real importance...can tel u more abut it if u wish...had done a research in the past.

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  13. Pallav11:16 AM

    Yup sure nandita :-))

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  14. SuneetYadav2:03 PM

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  15. Pallav7:25 PM

    Yup :-))

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  16. Kcalpesh10:30 PM

    I never was but now, I am becoming a fan of reading!! Very well written!

    Pixellicious Photos

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  17. Anonymous11:38 PM

    I really luved ur maroon moon..

    great going Pallav..!!

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  18. Pallav12:12 AM

    Thanks Kcalpesh and Celine :-)

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